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solaris127h 30th Dec 2020, 11:01 AM edit delete
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Oblivion OST playing in the background

Thanks for your patience as we work through this messy holiday season. Let's ring in a better year! Next update 1/5/21

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VelvetRainbow 30th Dec 2020, 11:27 AM
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STOP RIGHT THERE CRIMINAL SCUM! Nobody breaks the law on my watch! I'm confiscating your stolen goods. Now pay your fine or it's off to jail.
GreyCorsola 30th Dec 2020, 12:04 PM
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Next thing you know we're going to be talking about arrows in knees XD
Lavender-Tea-Dragon 30th Dec 2020, 11:37 AM
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Here here! I hope this next year is better! (^0^)9
GreyCorsola 30th Dec 2020, 12:04 PM
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Just gotta keep your head up and moving forwards! :D Here here!
noblejanobii 30th Dec 2020, 11:39 AM
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STOP YOU VIOLATED THE LAW
GreyCorsola 30th Dec 2020, 12:06 PM
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Pay the court a fine or serve your sentence! Your stolen goods are now forfeit- now pay with your blood!
borzoiteeth 30th Dec 2020, 4:18 PM
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Thanks for getting this song stuck in my head again.

But goodness love that touching bit at the end. Whoops, looks like this bat you've been carrying is holding more weight than you realised.
GreyCorsola 30th Dec 2020, 4:37 PM
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Oh my gooood I haven't heard this song is like 1000 years oml XDD

PSssh, it's only been miles and miles and miles of carrying effectively dead weight. //ba dum hiss//
TheStratovarian 30th Dec 2020, 6:17 PM
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Wow, just wow, theres so much you dropped here, especially with last panel.. I'm going to need to think and thunk on this one..

First, i don't think those are bat things. Those are psychic things poppy. You dont have the motion of irritation near them, you have them near her head. The best of thinky spots.

The lines you spoke last panel were too well timed to not be a form of new form adapting. And how well she moves and shifts in these, she's acclimated very well to the body in the rest it looks like.

As for Regigigas here, I wonder how much passive control it exerts to keep the town safe? That there are other towns of similar safety certain showcase them being likely active before and safety from what arcues did.


Oh boy, the easy spots out of the way, hrm.

Poppy and Brenn. First, both are clear and so very evocative, Body, face, and tone on both clear as a sunny day.

Brenn sadly seeing himself in both a mentor role, and his own actions (not to mention words) used here to rather devastating effect.

But he's been a trooper (while a good natured scoundrel despite it), and you can see how he moves to help poppy, both with getting down, and actually being willing to listen too. He's not told her of being wrong, or that she is 'just a kid' for matters that he disbelieves. (Just in matters of experience.)

And again, beautiful scenery, and angles I will happily compliment on. I may find more to look at, but this is very much a between them both moment, and setting up so many potential chekov situations.
GreyCorsola 30th Dec 2020, 7:41 PM
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God I absolutely love this dissection and the things you're pulling from the comic! I can't say much but it is absolutely so wonderful seeing you reading into things and just... So wonderful :> I love it so much, and I really love how you've enjoyed the page especially ;; It fills my heart with so much j o y!! Seeing your thinking process and how you're thinking of things/what you're noticing is literally the best thing ever.

:) it's even more fun seeing what you haven't noticed either ;) hehe

Thank you so much!!
TheStratovarian 30th Dec 2020, 11:55 PM
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The more I look at this, (to see if there was something else to glean) the more i'd say he done quite a few things around kids.

Maybe teaching, or something else.. (And its a wild guess, but last panel just strikes me from personal knowledge in the caretaking professions as supportive, its an unconscious thing you see them do.)

I'll have to find out like everyone else.

And you are welcome, I love looking at a world like this and just speculating/seeing how it is for when folks put forth the effort into little things like the gestures and body language (Such as brens unsaid "Okay, okay." as a placation, or a sympathetic "i've been there kid" in his sigh and look .)
GreyCorsola 31st Dec 2020, 9:09 AM
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Hehe and I do appreciate it a lot! Seeing what you're thinking and picking up on its just a lot of fun - especially when the power of hindsight in the future when looking back will give light to a lot of things XDD seeing also how you take the body language is also really interesting, since that's also very subtle XD

Thank you again!!
kitsune-rokko 31st Dec 2020, 8:44 PM
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I WANT TO GET OFF MR. BREEN'S WILD RIDE!

Really good pairing of the humorous/chaotic top half of the page with the more uneasy/quiet bottom half. I feel with both this juxtaposition and Eliza's emotion throughout, you capture just how overwhelming being thrust into new situations with little to no warning can be. You can really sense her drained-of-energy-ness, and also the tension between her and Breen over the lie, but Breen doing what he can to defuse it right away.

I don't have uhh... predictions/lore analysis since I myself am pretty exhausted myself brain-wise (it's pretty much a daily occurrence to me even if my life isn't riding on a big mushroom-exciting, ha ha), but yeah, that's why I appreciate you capturing that feeling so dang well!
GreyCorsola 31st Dec 2020, 9:08 PM
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Aww ;; Thankyou so much! (you can try to get off of Breen's wild ride but there's no escape!) Honestly Eliza is like a cranky baby right now- which. You know, she's had a pretty interesting day to say the least XD

I hope that you get some more rest tho and that your life doesn't stay as exhausting as it is for poor Eliza here

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