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Chapter 1 Part 8
Chapter 1 Part 8
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Chapter 1 Part 8
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solaris127h 7th Jan 2021, 6:00 PM edit delete
solaris127h
Sweet dreams...?

And that's a wrap for chapter 1, holy moly!! Thanks so much everyone for reading and I hope you enjoyed the ride! We'll be going on a 6-8 week hiatus as we prepare chapter 2.
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Comments:

noblejanobii 7th Jan 2021, 6:11 PM
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noblejanobii
Hmmm something tells me Breen isn't letting us in on an important detail in regards to Poppy.
GreyCorsola 7th Jan 2021, 10:51 PM
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GreyCorsola
Honesty is the best policy :)
The Alolan PokeNerd 7th Jan 2021, 6:13 PM
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The Alolan PokeNerd
Aw yeee! Chapter One was awesome! :D Can't wait for Chapter Two! ^^ And have a nice hiatus, you two! You deserve it! (^0^)9
GreyCorsola 7th Jan 2021, 10:51 PM
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GreyCorsola
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter as much as we did working on it! Now on to chapter two!
RogueCail 7th Jan 2021, 8:08 PM
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Sweet dreams indeed! Couldn't help but hear that in my head while I read haha. Amazing chapter once again, I'll be patiently awaiting the next one!
GreyCorsola 7th Jan 2021, 10:52 PM
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GreyCorsola
Yesss PMD music is the best kind of music to listen to in the background while reading. :) It's what I listen to anyways when writing it XD Thank you so much, I can't wait to show you what we have in store for chapter 2 :)
Lerati 7th Jan 2021, 8:32 PM
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All of your characters are so adorable. I just want to hug them.
GreyCorsola 7th Jan 2021, 10:52 PM
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GreyCorsola
God, same, I love them so much
Polymori 7th Jan 2021, 10:32 PM
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Polymori
"You'll be plenty helpful tomorrow" *suuuuus*
Eliza never mentioned being sorry she wasn't helpful.
And heh heh talonflame. Curious what pokemon she's now if not a talonflame :O
GreyCorsola 7th Jan 2021, 10:53 PM
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GreyCorsola
Sus? Nahhh It' s fine uwu don't worry about it. Baby steps tho for Eliza, it'll be fine.

As for what poppy is, you'll just have to wait and see :)
TheStratovarian 7th Jan 2021, 10:41 PM
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TheStratovarian
Oh boy... You dropped a right whammy didn't you.

I, oh boy... First, love the little move poke. Those rocks are evil. And those are scrolls next to the small chest arent they? Old, and certainly cared for as best they can be. As much as I might want to know the mysteries of the box, it will have to wait for another day. And thats a vest next to the jug. Very formal looking one that I think we might have seen before too.. hrm, that looks quite suspiciously like the vest we see both with at the start with.. I wonder..

And I have a suspicion, no particular why that her inner monologue after is something she's mentally speaking.

Seeing breen with huh, plaid covering, and those scrolls are maps... A very detailed map at a look we get, not something again often seen. Breen really does seem out of this world, doesn't he?

Twice she goes for inner dialogue, and breen is either hearing, or uncannily on point. (Id be betting on the former.)

The conversation that happens you see more of how he moves to listen in how he sits. And how he goes to look at the 'mention' of talonflame, but we dont get a mention of it before, should be neat to see what that is.

But I love the mirth and humor he has laying down and just talking. It's nice to see him being himself. And how deep it hits for being honestly thanked.

The adorable floomf is beyond adorable, and then oof on how it all hits.

Bravo on one heck of a chapter finale. Questions to look forward to, and so much good bonding.
GreyCorsola 7th Jan 2021, 11:12 PM
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GreyCorsola
Hehee I love seeing what details you're pointing at and what you're thinking might be going on :) Though I will say those aren't vests, but that indeed are some maps and a box :) Breen as well is a really fun character to look into and see what might be going through his head, unlike with Eliza where we get to see what's going on in that noggin of hers, for the most part :)

Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I'm so happy you're enjoying the story as much as we are writing it. I love getting to read you pick apart the page and see what you see :)



comercole 7th Jan 2021, 10:41 PM
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comercole
nice page a kind of heart warming one!!!!
GreyCorsola 7th Jan 2021, 10:55 PM
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GreyCorsola
Thank you so much!!
kitsune-rokko 8th Jan 2021, 1:20 AM
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kitsune-rokko
Ooh I love this little hut! It looks cozy! (even if I know it's probably very worn-out even for this world)

Oh! The well turned even a pokémon into another pokémon? (I look forward to seeing what the truth is once you unveil that)

Eliza's doing the snug bat thing oh my gooooooooosh

Also "Man, this 'kid' story is saving my ass, but it's super annoying. I'm like, 24" I love this line. I felt that when I was playing Pokémon Super Mystery Dungeon (I was 23 when I played it)
GreyCorsola 8th Jan 2021, 11:37 AM
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GreyCorsola
Hey, nothing wrong with the cozy little hut. It doesn't have a proper door, or lights really, but it's small and there's two whole beds that can fit in there no problem! It's all you need to survive.

Hehee I can't wait for the reveal too uwu

Eliza's bat wings have multiple uses! A lot better then normal hands... Probably.

Pdpfptpt god I feel that tho, when I played super mystery dungeon it was such a mood XD Eliza is already being treated like a child and she only just got here. I'm sure it's fine uwu

Thank you again so much for the lovely comic! I can't wait to show you chapter 2 :)
PSH who needs names 8th Jan 2021, 10:08 AM
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Alright a hiatus! I know like literally everyone does this after they finish a chapter and you two deserve one but my brain is a jerk and is annoyed
GreyCorsola 8th Jan 2021, 11:37 AM
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GreyCorsola
Aww but that's flattering though! It means you're super invested in the story, and I appreciate it a lot. I promise we'll come back as soon as we possibly can!
PSH who needs names 8th Jan 2021, 10:12 AM
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Which mystery dungeon game are you playing? I have a theory, but i need to know that first.
GreyCorsola 8th Jan 2021, 11:38 AM
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GreyCorsola
It's not based on any mystery dungeon game :> It's entirely based around the world running around in my head hehe
Salem Ga Kyokski 8th Jan 2021, 1:14 PM
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I theorize the Poppy in the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon world is not the same as Eliza's Poppy and different species of pokemon
GreyCorsola 8th Jan 2021, 8:58 PM
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GreyCorsola
Interesting theory :) - Grey
oh no 8th Jan 2021, 11:33 PM
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I love Breen's day one minecraft house
GreyCorsola 8th Jan 2021, 11:42 PM
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GreyCorsola
Oh my God I literally snorted irl over this. It probably doesn't help that I've been playing Minecraft too much and can relate too much to Breen right now XD
HipsterFlamingo 9th Jan 2021, 2:56 PM
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HipsterFlamingo
I'm not surprised Eliza has a headache, she lost half her health to stealth rock just walking into Breen's house. Can't wait to see what happens next!
GreyCorsola 10th Jan 2021, 1:34 AM
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GreyCorsola
She was warned about em! XDD thank you so much, chapter two is a lotta fun uwu
jackTM 12th Jan 2021, 9:27 AM
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jackTM
is that a well i see on the last panel

this comic is amazing so far
GreyCorsola 12th Jan 2021, 12:04 PM
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GreyCorsola
Hehe :) Thank you so much!
mizar 15th Jan 2021, 7:48 PM
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Haven't read this since you posted the first page, it's taken such I different turn that i expected, considering I had only seen eliza as a human up until that point! really love your inking style, its beautiful. great beats in the fight scenes. I'll try to keep up better with the next chapter, although binging through pages like this is nice as well lol
GreyCorsola 15th Jan 2021, 11:32 PM
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GreyCorsola
Aww ;; sobs thank you so much! I'm so glad you're liking the story so far, it's a lot of fun to work on! :D Binging is a lot of fun too but getting to hear your thoughts is also awesome <3 Thank you again! :D